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Editing proof · B2B SaaS

What my edits look like in the document.

Sanitized examples from tracked edits. These are here to show the level of intervention: structure, specificity, flow, stronger claims and cleaner phrasing.

Sanitized FAQ tracked changes
FAQ and search copy: tightening questions, reducing repetition and making answers more direct.
Sanitized product copy tracked changes
Product and feature copy: clarifying value, removing vague language and improving flow.
Typical decisions

What I was looking for.

  • Does the intro answer the reader’s question quickly enough?
  • Are the claims specific, grounded and supported?
  • Can a vague phrase become a useful example?
  • Does each section add something new, or are we repeating ourselves?
  • Does the sentence sound like the brand rather than generic AI copy?
  • Can the transition make the logic easier to follow?
Client and product identifiers have been cropped or omitted where possible. The purpose of these screenshots is to show editing judgment, not internal content.