More than proofreading.
The tracked version shows the kind of changes I make when an article needs stronger sentence construction, cleaner transitions, better information order and more defensible claims.
- Reworked patterned or repetitive sentence structures.
- Rearranged and reconstructed sentences for flow.
- Removed or corrected statements that needed stronger support.
- Improved tone and pacing while preserving the intended meaning.
- Completed grammar, syntax and final-polish checks.